My original draft was about E sports and whether or not they should put it on T.V. But in reality all I was talking about in the paper was Sports vs E sports.I didn't really talk about what I originally planned for. Because of this I either had to change the title or my whole paper.Instead of changing the whole question I tweaked it into; Why isn't E sports on Television?. I kept what I wrote and added on to it.
The most helpful feedback I have gotten was a question that asked what is e-sports? I realized at that moment that it isn't all to known to those who aren't into games. Because of this I decided to talk about what E sports was and how big it actually is. In order to make this piece awesome I want to know the opinions about those who don't play games , maybe even the sports fan so I can clear any questions they have or any arguments
The most helpful feedback I have gotten was a question that asked what is e-sports? I realized at that moment that it isn't all to known to those who aren't into games. Because of this I decided to talk about what E sports was and how big it actually is. In order to make this piece awesome I want to know the opinions about those who don't play games , maybe even the sports fan so I can clear any questions they have or any arguments